I am a year 8 learner at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teacher is Mrs Tui.
Thursday, September 7, 2017
Why Animals Shouldn't Be In Zoos
Animals in Zoo’s need to be freed they are born to live wild and how they want to. God put these animals on this earth to live freely not in captivity.
Hi Brooke, I think that your DLO and writing is excellent including the good convincing reasons. I also do think that animals shouldn’t be kept in Zoo’s. If you would like to you should proofread your writing to correct the mistakes. But other than that keep up the great blogging and work. Adios, Mikaela
Hi Brooke, I think that your DLO and writing is excellent including the good convincing reasons. I also do think that animals shouldn’t be kept in Zoo’s. If you would like to you should proofread your writing to correct the mistakes.
ReplyDeleteBut other than that keep up the great blogging and work.
Adios,
Mikaela