Monday, July 10, 2017

Day #5: Activity 1 - Winter Learning Journey (One step at a Time)

Activity 1: After a few hours in the car, you, your group and Curious Kiwi arrive at your first stop – The Lewis Pass Scenic Reserve. It is a beautiful, regional park located at the base of the Southern Alps. You and your group get out of the van and follow Curious Kiwi. He is going to lead you on a short walk through the park. As you start walking, you notice a really cool looking tree on the side of the trail and you stop to take a closer look. When you turn back, the group (and Curious Kiwi) is nowhere to be found. Eek! You are all alone in the middle of a strange forest.
For this activity write a short story (8-10 sentences) about what might happen next. Please be sure to include lots of details about what you might be feeling, seeing and doing after you realize that you are all alone in the forest...
My Work Below!


  1. Hello Brooke It's great to see you blogging. Your title is really interesting (Am I lost?). Keep up the great blogging.

  2. Kia Orana Brooke,

    Welcome to the Winter Learning Journey programme. My name is Jacinta and I am so excited to be blogging with you through the school holidays.

    Brooke, you started off with a good piece of writing. I really love the way to published your story with a good heading that is nice and clear images and a border. As I read your story, I was captured by the amount of verbs and adjectives used in your story. So creative! There is great imagery that any reader will be able to visualize and that is exactly what you have done. Captured the audience.

    I am so proud of your work. I agree with Stanley, it's great to see you blogging. Keep it up!